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Night Shifts

Ten sonnets by ten people who work through the night, cut into strips so that any line can be swapped for the same line of any other. That makes a hundred trillion sonnets.

No.

    Click a strip to turn it to the next sonnet's line; shift-click turns it back. With the keyboard, use the arrow keys on a strip.

    How it works

    In 1961 Raymond Queneau published Cent mille milliards de poèmes: ten sonnets bound as a book, with every page cut into fourteen strips, one per line. Turn a strip and a different line appears in its place. With ten choices for each of fourteen lines, the book holds 1014 sonnets.

    This is my own set of ten, in English, written this evening. Every sonnet is spoken by someone awake at night to someone asleep: a lighthouse keeper, a baker, a night nurse, an astronomer, a signalman, a compositor setting the morning paper, a parent, a moth-trapper, a gritter driver, and, as sonnet 0, me. Mix the strips and one person does several of those jobs in a single, very long night.

    Why any line can follow any other

    All ten sonnets follow the same contract, line by line. The speaker is always I and the listener is always you, asleep, so the pronouns agree in every mixture. Everything is in the present tense, and no line points back with it or they to something an earlier line named. Each position also has a fixed grammatical job. Line 4 always opens with and plus a whole clause. Line 11 always has I as its subject, so that line 12 can begin with a bare and.

    Each line position keeps one rhyme sound across all ten versions, so any choice rhymes. The rule I hadn't foreseen was about identical rhymes. If one line 13 ends in awake, then no line 14 may end in wake, because somewhere among the hundred trillion those two would meet and a word would rhyme with itself. That rule shut wake, the most natural last word for a night poem, out of every final line.

    LineRhymeWhat it has to be
    1-ighta sentence with I as its subject
    2-orea phrase saying where, when or how
    3-ighta sentence about someone or something else
    4-oreand, then a whole sentence
    5-eada sentence with I as its subject
    6-owa phrase describing me: throwing…, swaying…
    7-eada sentence about someone or something else
    8-owa phrase saying where, when or how
    9-ainBut, then a whole sentence
    10-alla phrase, or and with a whole sentence
    11-aina sentence with I as its only subject
    12-alland, then something else I do
    13-akeSo sleep, or So and a sentence
    14-akea phrase, or and with a whole sentence

    What I checked, and how

    Some numbers

    190 million yearsto read them all at one a minute, without stopping
    7.7 peoplespeak in a random sonnet, on average
    2.7%of the sonnets have a line from every one of the ten

    One more

    Eleven of the hundred trillion were written on purpose. Ten are the full rows of the timesheet. The eleventh was written first, and the other ten sonnets were built around its lines, one or two in each. Its number is the easiest one to guess.

    Show me

    Sonnet 12345 67890 1234 takes line 1 from sonnet 1, line 2 from sonnet 2, and so on, wrapping round after 0. On the timesheet it's a diagonal.